With a new
generation comes a new form of technology. Along with these new innovations in
our society, we have used it to our advantage through social media. With the
benefits and disadvantages to having social media, disadvantages have shown
more due to the amount of time that is irresponsibly consumed, influences
teens, and takes away physical activity.
As the world
progresses, the knowledge and technology develops with it as well. Social media
is given the purpose to save time by helping our society become more connected,
but for some, the amount of saved time could be the complete opposite. Although
some may not notice, the time being taken away due to social media is
exceedingly high. “There is no denying that social media does have its
uses, but our growing dependency on social media results in a disruption of
time for us.” (Kristen Ha) Time is taken up not just by teens but by adults as
well. “About 10 hours and 45 minutes per day are spent online”
(Katie Lepi). Our world today is becoming more reliant on technology, which
can lead to many disadvantages.
Social
media as not only developed but the users as well. With most teens being on
social media, it can be vey easy to be influenced by what is seen on social
media. Both boys and girls are being exposed to what is said to be a “perfect
image”. “The
sizes of supermodels and actresses often influence teenage girls -- who are
actively seeking to find an identity -- to believe they have to be thin to
exemplify beauty.” (Nola Mokeyane). Along with the information consumed though social
media, the way teens act are also affected. “The difference is that with social media,
adolescents not only consume information, they also produce it.” (Megan
Moreno).
With
the amount of time that is irresponsibly taken by the hours spent on social media,
less physical activity is being done. For instance, teens could be on social
media rather than going outside and getting exercise that is needed. Grades have also been affected by the usage
of social media. “Researchers have found that the middle-school, high school
and college students who used Facebook at least once during a 15 minute period
get lower grades overall.” (Chris Cosby) With that bullying has also become an
issue. “Cyber-bullying
has spread widely among youth, with 42% reporting that they have been victims.”
Social media has made its way to become both good and bad for teens today.
Though
many people may not see it, social media is taking the world by storm and has
greatly affected its users both positively and negatively. We are constantly
using it to a point where it has affected our daily life. Social media is a
growing trend that could that could possibly become bigger, but the society
today must realize that social media must be responsibly used to continue
having a healthy life away from technology.
your essay was good but dont forget to state your thesis in your introduction paragraph so we know what you are comparing and what you are siding on in my the beginning
ReplyDeleteWell written but i feel like with better information you can talk more about the topic, also what erin said don't forget about your thesis!!!
ReplyDeleteMS(3) YOUR INTRO IS WEAK, YOU DONT INTRODUCE AND DISCUSS ENOUGH. FIRST YOUR SAY COMES NEW TECHNOLOGY THEN QUICKLY JUMP TO NEW INNOVATIONS WITH NO DISCUSSION. YOU NEED TO DISCUSS TOPIC FIRST (SOCIAL MEDIA), THEN INTRO AND DISCUSS ISSUE, THEN STATE YOUR OPINION/THESIS. ALSO YOU NEED MUCH STRONGER FACTS TO TRULY PROVE YOUR THESIS CORRECT, YOU HAVE SOME DATA BUT YOU NEED TO FIND MUCH STRONGER EVIDENCE THAT SHOWS TRULY HOW AFFECTED PEOPLE ARE BY SOCIAL MEDIA. YOU CAN EVEN USE EXAMPLES OF EXPERIENCES FROM ARTICLES. ALSO CONCLUSION COULD BE A LOT STRONGER IN LASTING IDEAS.
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